Debut Novel Finally Out!!!

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Get people to post it on fb Gurj.
Iv popped a link on my Facebook, Always good to see someone persuing what they love

Appreciate the help Steve :yes

Spammed everyone i know on FB :spank

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Nice one Gurj

You must be very proud of yourself

Happy that the first part of the trilogy is out there now, lots of advertising to do yet though, hopefully can attract some good attention

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New page on Facebook:

https://www.facebook.com/TheAwakeningSamantha?ref=stream

[M@r]{]

Opened up my new Kindle and this was my first download  Cheers G, look forward to the two sequels

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{;845459\']Opened up my new Kindle and this was my first download  Cheers G, look forward to the two sequels

Thank you Mark

Hope you enjoy it mate, appreciate the support :Thumbs-up

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Also forgot to add, any help in promoting the novel very much appreciated :-)

[M@r]{]

About half way through and really enjoying it.  Would recommend to anyone.   My only criticism is the frequent referral to the police officer as  a "Trooper" even though the story is set in the UK, bugs me every time I read it!  

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{;849720\']About half way through and really enjoying it.  Would recommend to anyone.   My only criticism is the frequent referral to the police officer as  a "Trooper" even though the story is set in the UK, bugs me every time I read it!  

The smaller things can still be fixed, its the story in the main i hope people really enjoy :Thumbsup!

The one thing i found really difficult when writing was to try not to repeat myself  too much, really hard to do

Let me know if this is a really big issue Mark, the reason i called the ARU team members "troopers" was to keep them separate from the police "officers" in the same scenes. Later on it was to make sure you knew who i was referring to when i mentioned trooper - if that helps?

Thanks for the feedback so far, appreciate it :yes

[M@r]{]

Its not a big issue.  I think the danger is people would assume you are an american writer telling an English story, so any perceived inaccuracies could grate.  

I think the armed response in the Police force are called CO19?  Or is that just the Met?  If CO19 is correct perhaps you could refer to him as CO19 Officer Murray?  

Got a long train journey to do later, looking forward to getting stuck back into it  

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Just read your review on Amazon Mark, thank you so much for the kind words - makes the writing process rewarding when people enjoy your work :cheers

Working on the second novel as we speak :Thumbs-up

[M@r]{]

No problem, it really was a great book I wasn\'t just saying that because you wrote it.  I posted it up on Facebook too, one of my friends from Oz says they\'ve bought it now too  

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{;850823\']No problem, it really was a great book I wasn\'t just saying that because you wrote it.  I posted it up on Facebook too, one of my friends from Oz says they\'ve bought it now too  

Thanks Mark, appreciate the help :Thumbsup!

Once all my friends and family have copies will begin to resubmit to publishers properly, fingers crossed someone likes it :wiggle

[J_T]

Copy arrived Wednesday and just finished it.  Couldn\'t put it down, great read.  Thanks Gurj. :Thumbs-up

Now I need parts two and three... erm or I need parts two and three NOW!!!!

JT

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You will be happy to hear that part two is now out :yes

KINDLE: http://www.amazon.co.uk/The-Awakening-Revelations-Trilogy-ebook/dp/B00CUHDAVW/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1370885591&sr=8-1&keywords=the+awakening+revelations

PAPERBACK: http://www.amazon.co.uk/The-Awakening-Revelations-Trilogy/dp/1484866940/ref=sr_1_4?ie=UTF8&qid=1370885591&sr=8-4&keywords=the+awakening+revelations

Thank you for the support guys, greatly appreciated :wiggle

[J_T]

Part two dives straight in where one left off and is just as difficult to put down.  Another great job Gurj. :Thumbs-up

But that\'s a nice little cliffhanger you\'ve got going on there!!!  Have to have part three now!  :Thumbsup!